{"id":6089,"date":"2020-10-29T20:47:13","date_gmt":"2020-10-30T03:47:13","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/aigocoreano.com\/?p=596"},"modified":"2025-03-26T20:36:24","modified_gmt":"2025-03-27T03:36:24","slug":"mejorar-un-texto-sobre-graduacion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/6089","title":{"rendered":"Mejorar un texto sobre graduaci\u00f3n"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns alignwide is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-28f84493 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>Un usuario de nivel intermedio de idioma coreano en HelloTalk me pregunt\u00f3 si podr\u00eda corregir un texto que escribi\u00f3 sobre su graduaci\u00f3n. Encontr\u00e9 el texto bastante bien escrito, que incluso ten\u00eda un cierto desenlance literario. As\u00ed que le puse un poco de empe\u00f1o extra en mejorarlo.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>Texto original:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p>\ud1a0\uc694\uc77c\uc5d0 \uc81c \ub300\ud559 \uc878\uc5c5\uc774 \uc788\uc744 \uac70\uc608\uc694. \uadf8\ub798\uc11c \uc5b4\uc81c \ub300\ud559 \ud559\uc704\ub97c \uae30\ub2e4\ub838\uc5b4\uc694. \uc9d1 \ubc16\uc5d0 \ub098\uac00\uba74 \uc548 \ub410\uc5b4\uc694. \uc624\ud6c4 \ub450\uc2dc\uc5d0 \ub300\ud559\uad50 \uc5d0\uac8c\uc11c \ud0dd\ubc30\ub97c \ubc1b\uc558\uc5b4\uc694. \ub300\ud559 \ud559\uc704\ub098 \uc608\uc05c \uc120\ubb3c\ub3c4 \ubcf4\ub0b4 \uc92c\uc5b4\uc694. \uc81c \uc5b4\uba38\ub2c8\uaed8\uc11c \uc815\ub9d0 \ud589\ubcf5\ud558\uc154\uc11c \uc0ac\uc9c4\uc744 \ub9ce\uc774 \ucc0d\uc5b4 \uc8fc\uc2dc\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud558\uc168\uc694. \uc800\ub3c4 \ud589\ubcf5\ud588\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc9d1 \uc55e\uc5d0 \ub300\ud559 \ud559\uc704\ub97c \ubc1b\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc870\uae08 \uc774\uc0c1\ud588\ub124\uc694. \ud1a0\uc694\uc77c\uc5d0 \uc878\uc5c5 \ub3d9\uc548\uc5d0\ub3c4 \uc870\uae08 \uc774\uc0c1 \ud560 \uac83 \uac19\uc544\uc694.<\/p><cite>Paola<\/cite><\/blockquote>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Grab\u00e9 en video mi proceso de correci\u00f3n y sugerencias para mejorar el texto:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed-youtube alignwide wp-block-embed is-type-video is-provider-youtube wp-embed-aspect-4-3 wp-has-aspect-ratio\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Mejorar un p\u00e1rrafo sobre graduaci\u00f3n en idioma coreano\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/4w5Luk5kq3A?feature=oembed\" frameborder=\"0\" allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture; web-share\" referrerpolicy=\"strict-origin-when-cross-origin\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>Este es el <a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1LKy_qY_a7PY230DCnzCuP7fIrQvqZoPubAbZck63-80\/edit\">texto revisado<\/a>:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc6b0\ub9ac \ub300\ud559\uc740 \uc774\ubc88 \ud1a0\uc694\uc77c\uc5d0 \uc878\uc5c5\uc2dd\uc744 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubcf4\ud1b5\uc740 \uc878\uc5c5\uc2dd\uc5d0\uc11c \ud559\uc704\uc99d\uc744 \ubc1b\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ucf54\ub85c\ub098\ubc14\uc774\ub7ec\uc2a4 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc2dd\uc740 \ud654\uc0c1\ud1b5\ud654\ub85c \ud560 \uac70\uc5d0\uc694. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc878\uc5c5\uc99d\uc740 \uc9d1\uc73c\ub85c \ubc30\ub2ec\uc635\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub798\uc11c \uc5b4\uc81c\ub294 \ud558\ub8e8 \uc885\uc77c \uc9d1\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc30\ub2ec\uc774 \uc624\uae30\ub97c \uae30\ub2e4\ub838\uc5b4\uc694. \uc624\ud6c4 \ub450\uc2dc\ub098 \ub418\uc5b4\uc11c \ud0dd\ubc30\uac00 \uc654\uc5b4\uc694. \uc0c1\uc790 \uc548\uc5d0\ub294 \uc878\uc5c5\uc99d\ub9cc \uc788\ub294\uac8c \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc608\uc05c \ucd95\ud558 \uc120\ubb3c\ub3c4 \ub4e4\uc5b4 \uc788\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc694. \uc5b4\uba38\ub2c8\uaed8\uc11c\ub294 \uc815\ub9d0 \ud589\ubcf5\ud574\ud558\uba74\uc11c \uae30\ub150 \uc0ac\uc9c4\uc744 \ub9ce\uc774 \ucc0d\uc5b4 \uc8fc\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud558\uc168\uc5b4\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc800\ub294 \ud589\ubcf5\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \ub2e4\ub978 \ud55c\ud3b8\uc73c\ub85c\ub294 \uc878\uc5c5\uc2dd\uc744 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c \ud558\ub294\uac8c \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc9d1 \uc55e\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud0dd\ubc30\ub85c \ubc1b\uac8c \ub418\uc5b4 \ub9c8\uc74c\uc774 \uc2f1\uc22d\uc0dd\uc22d\ud588\uc5b4\uc694. \ube44\ub85d \uc878\uc5c5\uc2dd \uc790\uccb4\ub294 \ud1a0\uc694\uc77c\uc5d0 \ud654\uc0c1\ud1b5\ud654\ub85c \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uadf8\ub54c\uac00 \ub418\ub3c4 \uc81c \ub9c8\uc74c\uc740 \uc5b4\ub5a8\uc9c0 \uc798 \ubaa8\ub974\uaca0\uc5b4\uc694.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Un usuario de nivel intermedio de idioma coreano en HelloTalk me pregunt\u00f3 si podr\u00eda corregir un texto que escribi\u00f3 sobre su graduaci\u00f3n. Encontr\u00e9 el texto bastante bien escrito, que incluso ten\u00eda un cierto desenlance literario. As\u00ed que le puse un poco de empe\u00f1o extra en mejorarlo. Texto original: \ud1a0\uc694\uc77c\uc5d0 \uc81c \ub300\ud559 \uc878\uc5c5\uc774 \uc788\uc744 \uac70\uc608\uc694. \uadf8\ub798\uc11c [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":5985,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[395],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-6089","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-learn"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6089","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6089"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6089\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6169,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6089\/revisions\/6169"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/5985"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6089"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=6089"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yokim.net\/es\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=6089"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}